Home > Longer Fiction > Inventing backstory as you go

Inventing backstory as you go

December 11th, 2009

I used to put a great deal of importance on backstory. Backstory, I thought, really makes a tale great. And I used to think that meant spending ages refining it, before even starting on the story proper.

I would think of Star Wars, and how Mr. Lucas started with the middle three chapters of the story (and we’ve seen what difficulty he had in trying to start from the very beginning. Born from midichloreans indeed); and I watched Akira, noticing how the vast bulk of the story actually happened in the past. Backstory was everything.

It would follow then, that a large portion of my writing time would be spent on fleshing out the backstory, and making it compelling. It was, after all, the backdrop to the story; the motivation for the characters; the very reason for the events in the story proper to now take place. Complete all this, and my story would take care of itself.

Well, okay. Maybe. But I don’t think that way now, and in truth, I never tried it out this way either. Of course backstory is important, and especially in a film like Akira, where the situation is basically, “what happened before might happen again”. But I would argue that the really important parts of your backstory, the ones that make your premise possible, you already know. The rest is for texture and theming; still important of course, but I’m not keen on spending pages and pages writing complete histories for each of my characters. And I don’t think it’s necessary.

With the story I’m currently writing, I’m taking the same approach to backstory as I’m trying with plot (see this article from Craig). I’m not entirely making it up as I go along, I have a very rough idea, but for the most part, I’m experimenting, having fun just making stuff up, and seeing what feels right. That stuff stays, the rest goes. I’ve got to be careful, of course, when I plant the seed of a potential plot development or character backstory, I’ve got to be aware that’s what I’m doing. I’ve got to remember I’ve done it, and think about where it can go, what other connections can be made. Otherwise I’ll just end up with a birds nest of ideas. I think as long as I keep my wits about me I should be alright, but I’ll keep you posted.

Any tips or discussion around backstory? You know what to do!

Bookmark and Share

Matt Longer Fiction , , , ,

  1. Craig
    December 22nd, 2009 at 23:05 | #1

    This is a tricky line to navigate isnt it? Well, most writing is lets be fair, but backstory is a tricky one.

    Too much and you become overwhelmed as a reader, and it makes it dull and lifeless. Too little and it seems like your characters are in a void, and two dimensional. Its another one of those writing rules isnt it? drop into a scene as late as possible, and depart as soon as you can. Dropping into the middle of the action, or even the middle of a story can give the writing great energy.

    Its also different for different genres isnt it? Scifi and fantasy are the two toughies. Obviously scifi you need to create the specific world, whether it involve aliens, robots or corporate AIs, and with fantasy you need to generate a fantasy world (including no doubt, orcs, elves, dwarves and wizards) and making that fresh and exciting is difficult. But you still need the backstory there, dont you? Otherwise people cant connect.

    I’ve always been a stickler for backstory. I do like to create the worlds of my characters. A lot of the time in intricate detail. But the thing i always find funny is that there is never any way for me to write that into the actual story, so the reader never gets to view the world at large. This I guess is a good thing. If you create the world and you have it all in your head, you dont need to explain it. The way your characters behave in the world will do all the explaining for you, right?

  1. No trackbacks yet.